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Open Poetry #47

You Do Something to Me

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2011-06-01 07:10 PM

You Do Something to Me

You don't know
but I know
exactly how I feel
when I am in your presence.
You see me smile,
you know I am happy
when I'm with you,
I feel like
I can be
exactly who I am
or anyone I want to be
and you would accept me,
for you seem
to have mastered
the art of love
and acceptance
and I value
those virtues
that you possess
yet so freely
give.

JamesLee
31May
2011

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2011-06-02 03:35 AM

quote:
I feel like
I can be
exactly who I am
or anyone I want to be
and you would accept me,

I love how you feel, dear James. And the thoughts you have expressed here so beautifully, are of the utmost significance in a bond of love, of true love ...

Love,
Margherita

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

2 posted 2011-06-02 10:04 PM

nothing beats a great love poem...i love it, James

Love,

Faith

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

3 posted 2011-06-04 10:25 PM

finely simple, succinct Romanticism!

D.Lester Young
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

4 posted 2011-06-05 02:30 PM

Love the wings of your words dancing in the love of your verse.

David Lester Young

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