Open Poetry #47 |
Jolie Blon's Lagniappe |
JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Oh, da moon looks so strange It's a harvest moon night don't'ja'know Dat moon is blood red On a Louisiana Saturday Night Down at Jolie Blon's Lagniappe Smell that crawfish boiling in dat pot Don’t forget to add dem taters and garlic, sha Close dat screen door, flies are getting out Peoples startin' ta do a little jitterbugging On da hardwood floor Saturday night time to let it all hang loose Been working hard fa da whole damn week Shoulder to dat wheel, grindstone up the . . . Dat hot grease jest about right Be throwing in some sac-a-lait soon Fry 'em up nice and brown and take 'em out Foot tapping zydeco, accordion and rub-board Gets dem feets ta flying, sha Forgettin' about ya trouble And the little misses done come up with child again Can't hardly feed da ones ya got But tonight it's laissez les bon temps rouler Along with the fried sac-a-lait We shimmy and shake, shoulders rollin' Hips a-swaying and soon the band breaks Into some slow, getting' ta know yo partner better Kinda music Been dancing to the hot licks zydeco all night long Time for some Louisiana two-step Head on shoulder kind of relaxing music Where my honey whispers in my ear When I get you home, sha I'm gonna fricassee ya lovin' tool down to nuttin' Then start all over again AAieee!!! My brown-skinned honey's lovin' was Battered and prime time Ah, ya, Saturday Night at Jolie Blon's Lagniappe ~ Diplomacy is the art of saying 'Nice doggie' until you can find a rock ~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (06-04-2011 04:36 PM).] |
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Duck1946 Member
since 2011-05-16
Posts 84Nebraska |
I truely get the feeling that I am sitting in a Louisiana jass joint with a cold beer in my hand waiting for my order of crawfish to arrive. Delightful poem. What a talent you have! |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Sho 'nuff sha, dem crawfish be coming to ya in a little bit Thank you, Duck, for being here. ~ Diplomacy is the art of saying 'Nice doggie' until you can find a rock ~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
You got it all Jerry, the sights, sounds, smells and the real McCoy conversation. Way to go my friend. You made me hungry. Lori |
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AlCowie Member
since 2011-05-13
Posts 92London, UK |
That is such a cracking poem! Could really hear it, smiled all the way through and still smiling chap! Al |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
How y'all are, Lori, brought yo-sef right heah. Haha Thanks for stopping by the hoedown, dem crawfish be dipped outta dat pot pretty soon, sha. Tinks fo being heah. I'm happy I was able to put a smile on your face with my poem, Al, you saying that put one on mine, Thank you. ~ Diplomacy is the art of saying 'Nice doggie' until you can find a rock ~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read and think about...James |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Okay, James, glad it is. ~ Diplomacy is the art of saying 'Nice doggie' until you can find a rock ~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I have been in Louisiana for a catfish festival of all things, and as a Canuck I could barely understand the language they were speaking LOL. You took me back to a wonderfully pleasant time in my life, thank you. I am sending this to Karen (Serenity) and I bet she will have something to say about this. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Haha! I hear what you're saying, sha, the accent gets a bit heavy from time to time, especially at an old-fashioned Cajun dance. Thanks for your kind remarks. ~ Diplomacy is the art of saying 'Nice doggie' until you can find a rock ~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (06-04-2011 04:35 PM).] |
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Word Weaver Member
since 2011-03-06
Posts 437California, USA |
Dear Jerry, I can tell you had as much fun writing this as I did reading it. Great poem my friend. I felt as though I was there and wish I had been. Hugs, Marcia |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thanks Marcia, glad you liked my poem. Yep, it was fun. ~ Diplomacy is the art of saying 'Nice doggie' until you can find a rock ~ |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
Ya know i'm a sucker for a poem about Louisiana and dat one's really fine...love dat zydeco stuff too...was just like being there, JerryPat...love it Love, Faith There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
. . . and it was nice ta have ya here too, sha . . . say brought yoself on over heah, I got somthin' to told you . . . Thanks for the nice-nice . . . ~ Even if you are on the right track, you'll get run over if you just sit there.--Will Rogers ~ |
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