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Open Poetry #47

a man in love

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

0 posted 2011-05-26 08:16 PM

he waits for her
his princess
the woman of
his wildest dreams
yes, his kind
of woman
in due time
she will saunter by

he longs to
catch her eye
for in her eyes
he sees something
of beauty
something that
makes his heart
pound in his chest
oh how he yearns
to touch her

he wants to gaze
at her long legs
and hear her high heels
clicking on the pavement
knowing he is a commoner
among men he holds back
thinking she will
break his heart
if she passes by
without a word

then she comes round
the corner of the
station looking like
a goddess to him
the woman he has
dreamed of holding
in his arms
the one he longs for
late at night
his eyes wide awake

he has never
seen her looking
so absolutely stunning
he had the words
he would say
to her rehearsed
when he saw her today

yet now all
he could do was
stand and stare
at her dumb-struck
his soul on fire
as he watched
her wink at him
and climb aboard
the bus that
goes down town

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2011-05-26 08:49 PM

Where there's a wink there's a smile. Where there's a smile there's a touch. Where there's a touch there's a . . .

~ I went to a restaurant that serves "breakfast at any time" / I ordered French Toast during the Renaissance ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2011-05-26 08:52 PM

Yes Ma'am I do belive we have a winner here.
nice one Faith!

Lori

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

3 posted 2011-05-26 09:40 PM

Dear JerryPat-Yes, yes and yes...ha! thanks for reading and commenting.

Love,

Faith

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

4 posted 2011-05-26 09:42 PM

Dear Lori-Thank you for your wonderful remarks. I appreciate them so much.

Love,

Faith

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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