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Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

0 posted 2011-05-21 11:56 AM

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The ultimate answer

While sunrays slip into her every pore
she stirs and stretches in pure delight.
Behind her eyelids the colors dance,
changing from purple to indigo blue
and all the other rainbow palette hues.

A stunning show begins to display
on the inside screen of her closed eyes.
Words, numbers, signs and equations
race simultaneously like fragments of dreams
across a never ending vivid mental sheet.

The mind’s visualization occurs at high speed,
she finds it challenging to keep the pace.
Deep emotion accompanies the projection.
Is this the collective consciousness stream
or is it a secret message she must decode?

Is it the brain recharging energy from the sun?
She wonders while cosmic fullness manifests.
Suddenly one single word appears in capital letters,
it floods her every cell with its significance.
Her eyes blur as she is moved to the core.

One single word found its way through chaos
winning the race to touch her awareness,
that word was LOVE and it was full of light.
It expanded and she immersed in its embrace.
Her open eyes now see Universe’s harmony.

The gift has been detected by the radar of her heart.
The ultimate answer is LOVE.

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OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

1 posted 2011-05-21 12:02 PM

This is glorious, Margherita. So exquisitely portrayed that the reader can see what you saw image for image and such a wonderful climax.

Owl

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2011-05-21 12:56 PM

Love is the key, no doubt about it, Margherita. It's too bad that along with love there are sometimes bad things that happen in its name. But then, that wouldn't be love, would it?

~ 24 hours in a day ... 24 beers in a case .... Coincidence? ~

Paul Wilson

Member Elite

since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

3 posted 2011-05-21 03:32 PM

Margherita...Great poem, tenderly done. Thanks for sharing...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

4 posted 2011-05-21 04:48 PM

Yes, it is the ultimate answer.
If we are open to receive it, there are
no other questions.

Your answer is the winning one indeed

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2011-05-21 04:56 PM

Behind her eyelids the colors dance,

~*~

And this is why I so enjoy you!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2011-05-21 07:08 PM

Fine writing...James

Amaryllis
Senior Member

since 2010-05-20

Posts 1306
Mi now

7 posted 2011-05-21 11:02 PM

Beautiful, Margherita! What a lovely way to come to the answer.

Such fine writing!

A

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

8 posted 2011-05-21 11:08 PM

One single word found its way through chaos
winning the race to touch her awareness,
that word was LOVE and it was full of light.

Oh that's so good and so are you!

Write on!!

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

9 posted 2011-05-22 06:07 AM

Dear Diana, thank you for your glorious comment.

Dear Jerry, thank you so much for your kind comment. I believe nothing bad can happen in Love's name, something bad can happen when we lose clarity about the meaning of Love and its true magnificent intrinsic power. We are humans who tend to forget, that's it!

Dear Paul, thank you so much for your kindness in replying and for detecting a touch of tenderness here.

Thank you kindly, dear EmmaRose, for your loving comment.

Dear Karilea, you bring smiles. The appreciation is reciprocal, my friend! We love to dance with words.

Thank you, dear James, for enjoying the read and for your loving comment.

Welcome back, dear Amaryllis, you have been much missed! Thank you for deeming this write a fine one. You please me.

Dear Eric, good to see you back on Pip too! Thank you for the very loving comment.

Love and may you all enjoy a wonderful Sunday!

Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

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