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Open Poetry #47

Moon Pas de Deux

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

0 posted 2011-05-21 02:09 AM

MOON PAS DE DEUX
20 May 2011

We made it to the moon
and danced
with the stars
until the sun
sang its own rebirth,
and Love’s might
was celestially bright.

Owl

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2011-05-21 04:06 AM

A sparkling jewel, dear Owl!

Love,
Margherita

ice
Member Elite

since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

2 posted 2011-05-21 05:48 AM

Still holding you in the shimmer of it,
'till the moon became dim by the sun;
Love became more obvious
Having held you through the night-
Untill daybright blinded the stars.

OMG---I just had to add this...sorry if you feel it takes away from you wonderful poem..
If you think it does please e-mail me, Dianna
And I will retract..

The poem is lovely and inspiring, I could not help myself.

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

3 posted 2011-05-21 06:04 AM

Thank you, Margherita for your kind words.

Thank you Ford. I see your poem as a separate one about your own experiences, but lovely.

Owl

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