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Open Poetry #47

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LoneWolf
Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 384
IL

0 posted 2011-05-20 03:15 AM

Invisible

Fighting and clawing
Just to see the stars
Slipping.
Falling.
Reaching out.
Never seen
Forgotten
As stars shine on

My path is the correct one. I believe that if nothing else.

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

1 posted 2011-05-20 04:07 AM

I see the poetry, read it, soak it in and think "Nope, not invisible" ~ then think of how it feels to feel as if I am.

If that makes sense.
Alison

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2011-05-20 08:06 AM

I think astrophiles should never go alone up to those heights where stars can be observed better without light pollution.

As you say in this impressive poem, it could be fatal.

Yet, I think that astrophiles are loved by the stars and consequently they are accompanied by the Angels.

Love,
Margherita

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

3 posted 2011-05-22 01:42 PM

Enjoyed... *~Coco~*

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