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Pinscher Perfect |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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Proud lines Dobie distinctive Sleek shiny Black and brown Distinguished Dark eyes Always on guard Waiting… For daddy To come home Dissolving his dignified With belly rubs Into puppy love Like lickings LGR©5/10/11 [This message has been edited by Lori Grosser Rhoden (05-11-2011 08:12 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Smiling with this one! |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I hope it will smile all the dog lovers at the blue buffet  Lori |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
awwww. Lori, how could i not smile at this one...i love my dogs so much...great wonderful poem, my friend...i love it Love, faith There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Oh, gorgeous! Woof, woof, woof to the angel. Is his name Dobie? If not, what? Please give him lots of kisses and hugs and belly rubs from his South African Auntie Di (the doggy, not his Daddy!). My Benji is also black and brown with dark eyes. Owl |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Oh, I've got it, I've got it, I've got it! I was expecting a poem about a crab as I opened it up - but the pincer means that your angel is a Doberman Pinscher - and of course, the Doby is referring to Doberman. That would explain it. My Benji-baby is a miniature Doberman Pinscher - hence the similarity of colour and eye-colour! How could I have been so slow! That took me a good 5 minutes to realise! Duh! Blush, blush! So, now that I know his name is not Doby, please tell me what his name is. Owl |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Faith I'm glad you liked this one. ________________________________________ Owl thanks for correcting my spelling! Actually it is not my dog I just tried to think of the most dignified breed that would contrast by being all lovey with it's master. I think the Doberman is one of the most gorgeous breeds. Never had one though. Lori |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Lori, although I know you wouldn't have minded if I had been correcting the spelling, I actually thought you were playing with the word. I love your poem. Even if the dog is an imagined one, I still think he needs a name, (pretty please?). Perhaps this is a sign that a Doberman Pinscher is going to find you - or perhaps the poem would drop a hint to your hubby! Smiles. Owl |
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