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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Left on a battlefield without surrender Abandoned by yon progeny last Ever forgotten, cold pretender Feelings lie buried by memories past Thought-gobbets’ crystals are no longer clear No longer mattering, no longer dear Left in a corner without simple regard Restrained not by caution’s care-filled hand Overlooked, the distance rent apart Discounted deeply in a no discount land Thought-crystals’ gobbets are no longer clear No longer mattering, no longer dear As a smile and a glace seem to put me away In a dark drawer’s duster, so cold and so gray |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I will admit I had to look up the word for gobbet, because I wanted to be sure on its context. It all fits, and it is thought-provoking. Well done, Steven |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I too had to look it up but yes, it's a very interesting piece you've written. Nothing stays the same in reality. Enjoyed reading and fathoming.....grin.... Eric Love does not look after it's own interests. |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
very deep and well-written...nice work as always! There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Yep. Gobbet. We have learned a new word. Thanks for that. And the poem that word revolved around wasn't bad either. Nice work. Intolerant people are the people who do not believe the way we want them to, which makes us intolerant by default.—July 26, 2010 |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
hey guys, so then I am not alone with learning a new word...and I am in great company...I didn't find the word and write around it, rather I needed a word for it and found the word...so glad you all liked it...Sunshine, Eric, faithm, JerryPat, and me...we all get a vocabulary star for the day!  |
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