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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2011-01-13 09:39 AM

Last night
I fell asleep early
You came to bed
as I dreamed

In the morning
oversleeping
hitting the floor
on the run

Missing out
on my loving
both coming
and going

My day
incomplete
my head
stuck on you

My thoughts
in your arms
with lips
to skin

LGR©1/13/11

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

1 posted 2011-01-13 09:50 AM

Such tenderness. Enjoyed.

-Trina
Be thankful for every person who has caused you pain. In that moment, they became your assistant of growth.

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

2 posted 2011-01-13 11:24 AM

Drat! I hate it when that happens

"Whoever is not in his coffin and the dark grave let him know he has enough."-Robert Goolrick from "Reliable Wife"

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2011-01-13 12:48 PM

Slow down, my friend...
and you'll even smell
roses in January.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2011-01-13 01:20 PM

ms lori...enjoyed this view of you

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

5 posted 2011-01-13 01:59 PM

ah, sweet...gentle and lovely poem!

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

6 posted 2011-01-13 05:46 PM

a love missed poem...
excellent!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2011-01-13 06:58 PM

Nice...James

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

8 posted 2011-01-14 08:19 AM

Trina, Jerry and Sunshine-
thanks for checking this one out and your comments.
__________________________________________
D, Faith, Lady and James-
Thank you for your eyes here and your comments. I'm glad you liked it.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

9 posted 2011-01-15 02:26 AM

AAAAAWWWWW don't ya hate it when ya miss all the good stuff!?!

Simply but cleverly painted scene Lori

Eric

Love does not look after it's own interests.

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

10 posted 2011-01-15 06:21 PM

this was beautiful and the ending...well, it is magnificent

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