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Outside world |
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Dawn Brink Junior Member
since 2011-04-28
Posts 44South Africa |
Through the window, outside world Rained in mist. My vision blurred by moisture from God's heart and my mind settling softly in a strange new despair. Outside world, so far away I withdraw and protect my soul. Inside I wonder about the outside world and hope starts to light up the outer edges of my heart. Maybe the mist won't last forever and maybe my world, outside and inside won't stay as somber as it seemed. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
I hope so, Dawn, what a superb write about spleen and figurate mist, thanks for the beautiful share, yann |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Exquisitely expressed, Dawn. Sometimes we need a time apart to replenish our heart and soul. Use it well and rest, and I am hope, pray and believe you will soon see the sunrise with new and happier eyes. Owl |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
A good reflection and hopefully a better day tomorrow |
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