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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

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South Louisiana

0 posted 2011-05-09 04:35 PM

I took the poem titles from PiP Board on May 8, 2011, and tried to make a poem out of them . . .

surviving American corporations
knots with strings attached
I seek not perfection
a preferential truth
dots on the battlefield
in memory
time with you
the shadows romance
barefoot in the storm
Sabi
voyage of days
soldier to soldier
life out of control
celebrating BD (a little buzzed) may be x-rated by some
snapping my head with her finger
sometimes, Sunday
reciting poetry
mona lisa moment
the path we all must take
heroine chic
can't sleep
heartsleeves tears
mask of the clown
to dream of Spain
a song for a Sabi girl
for pop
when
may
laugh
yes
Kyoka apologies
in Katmandu
sucking on an olive pit
in the name of no time
my angel
lies from her bedroom
heart keys of mss whisker
slivers in my heart
clouds and rain
in firth
winds of tomorrow
going south
precious good dog
the curved left road
Isabell's towers
splendor in the afternoon
broken by fate
given my all
to you who have always been so proud
the direction of affection
raw joy
red Lexis
Copacabana
boom! boom!
Reva
how it started
baskin with gwendolynne robins
tête-à-tête with myself and me
my unwanted guest
Sammy Sunshine and Mirabelle
frown clown
the dream
the tumbling light
happy birthday Debbie
the man in the street
spectre from the past
Japan earthquake
survival
requiescat
my thoughts
just in case I am about to be murdered
tipshoe sigh song
rhapsody in D major
send off
reflections
on the first anniversary my heart finally broke
wishes
a rare flower
rancho la brea
hopefulness
mention trees and sun strings
lonely
jealous eyes
flower of love
every act
look in the mirror
an ordinary day
nine one one
upwards
wings
justice
bin laden

~ I think we should only read books that wound and stab us.-Kafka ~

faithmairee
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since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

1 posted 2011-05-09 04:53 PM

very clever one....missed it by a day...lol

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

dreamgal
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since 2011-03-17

Posts 442

2 posted 2011-05-09 04:54 PM

This was very clever Jerry, mixing it up here on pip keeps it interesting, thanks for doing just that!

Dreamgal

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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3 posted 2011-05-09 04:55 PM

cool idea Jerry and this poem makes more sense than some I've read
Lori

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

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South Louisiana

4 posted 2011-05-09 05:00 PM

Hah! Yes you did, Faith, maybe I can sneak you in . . .

Thanks Dreamgal, appreciate it . . .

Thanks for saying that, Lori, I tried to link the titles together that pretty much made sense . . .

~ I think we should only read books that wound and stab us.-Kafka ~

Sunshine

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5 posted 2011-05-09 05:29 PM

Poets take the titles now and then and come up with some very interesting static poems...

it's fun, isn't it?

And interesting with what turns out...

Good stuff, Sir

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

6 posted 2011-05-09 05:32 PM

Hahaha!! That's what happens, Sunshine, when you get bored. Thanks . . . I enjoyed doing it.

~ I think we should only read books that wound and stab us.-Kafka ~

faithmairee
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since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

7 posted 2011-05-09 05:47 PM

that was sweet of you...if you did i'd be honored

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

8 posted 2011-05-09 06:12 PM

This was so cute I read it twice, dear Jerry!

It's as if you played puzzle and the final result is really good.

Love,
Margherita

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

9 posted 2011-05-09 06:17 PM

It is done, Faith

Margherita, thank you, it was kinda like crossword puzzle . . . Interesting . . . Thanks.

~ I think we should only read books that wound and stab us.-Kafka ~

faithmairee
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since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

10 posted 2011-05-09 07:02 PM

ah, now that's very cool that you did that...thanks, JerryPat...i'm honored

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

11 posted 2011-05-09 07:06 PM

You're welcome, Faith . . .

~ I think we should only read books that wound and stab us.-Kafka ~

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

12 posted 2011-05-10 11:29 PM

Nice one Jerry...James

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

13 posted 2011-05-11 06:27 AM

Thanks, James.

~ I think we should only read books that wound and stab us.-Kafka ~

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

14 posted 2011-05-11 10:51 AM

I love this Jerry, and i don't feel alone anymore, I had the same idea a few days ago with TV programs, (may be I will write one) it can be realistic interesting and poetic, your is outstanding

yann

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

15 posted 2011-05-11 10:52 AM

Appreciate it, yann

~ I think we should only read books that wound and stab us.-Kafka ~

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