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Open Poetry #47

Sabi

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2011-05-08 11:15 AM

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Once—she was beautiful

Oak leaves falling
From old trees

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Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2011-05-08 11:17 AM

Very very pertinent!

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2011-05-08 11:51 AM

Ah, I maintain there is still beauty in old oak trees.

~ I have never been in a situation where having money made it worse. ~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2011-05-08 12:37 PM

The story of Sabi is old and true. Thank you for sharing your version, John.

ice
Member Elite

since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

4 posted 2011-05-08 09:44 PM

Perfect

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

5 posted 2011-05-09 02:35 PM

lovely

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

6 posted 2011-05-09 02:48 PM

very lovely, indeed...enjoyed it!

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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