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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2011-05-08 07:11 AM

I recognized her from some dream town
where she was blond song and golden
and her heart was out in the open
along with the key to open it closely

she brought me a smile in her bottle
then listened to my distractions
while my eyes journeyed her charms
and told my mind about her lovely

later in the valley of thunder
she brought me her eyes with some sun
I fell into them instantly, slowly
but wanted her lips just to save me

then drown me again in her smile whiskey

_______________

daark

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2011-05-08 07:13 AM

Great. Made me think of an old western, the lone cowpoke ambling into town and Miss Kitty behind the bar, or maybe circulating the room. good.

~ I have never been in a situation where having money made it worse. ~

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

2 posted 2011-05-08 07:15 AM

Very beautiful, Dark.

Owl

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2011-05-08 07:19 AM

jp...thanks guy...it is in moseytown...I rode in on the scoot etc etc..

________________

Lady Owl...thank you lady friend

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2011-05-08 11:33 AM

I recognized her from some dream town
where she was blond song and golden
and her heart was out in the open

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Oh D, I just love that slant of sun and how you dream it.

Hugs you, dude!

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2011-05-08 04:04 PM

babyblue...thanks babe

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2011-05-11 03:30 AM

If anybody possesses heart keys that must be you, dear D.!

For sure your words are as charming as any smile to sip on.

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

7 posted 2011-05-11 06:33 AM

ms mar, thank you gentle lady

kingsangel
Member

since 2009-11-04

Posts 50

8 posted 2011-05-12 03:33 PM

and her heart was out in the open
along with the key to open it closely

Loved this part ... found my heart in that place once with the key dangling .... still trying to get the key back lol

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

9 posted 2011-05-12 03:39 PM

ms angel...just change the locks...grin

thanks lady

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

10 posted 2011-05-20 02:07 AM

Love when you take us to moseytown.

Ali-san.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

11 posted 2011-05-20 05:41 AM

ms ali-san...thank you babe

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