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Winds Of Tomorrow
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Winds Of Tomorrow |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States 
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Winds Of Tomorrow By Paul Wilson There’s a strange feeling riding the winds of tomorrow Prophets speak of death destruction and sorrow Who knows what the future holds will stars and moon seal our fate Will mountains rise up from the sea will God swing open Heavens gate Stories have been told by many one day earth will be no more Words written in blood by those that were here before Shall we heed their warnings or throw caution to the wind Into the darkness dreams may fall or is it all just pretend Winds of time will always blow seeds of today into tomorrow Who will find and plant them will they tell our tales of sorrow Perhaps we’ve used all our tomorrows and rain will wash away our legacy No memory of our existence will be found is this how it was meant to be ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ Paul |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
A somber piece of writing. I like somber writing, so I like this. You raise many questions. The world seems to be going the hell in that old familiar hand-basket. Each day brings some kind of new horror. We have perfected the way to hate. ~ Logical argument is what destroys poetry because poetry is beyond logic.—Robert Graves ~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...James |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Jerry Pat2...From a fellow Louisiana resident to another, thanks for taking time to read and for your reply. Like you said it really does seem like we are on a one way road to self destruction. Hopefully things will turn around so our future generations can enjoy the same things we did and improve on it. Thanks Again...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
James...Thanks my friend for the read and reply. Glad you liked it...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You have written an excellent piece of poetry, dear Paul. I don't think that we have used up all of our tomorrows but the times are no doubt extremely critical. Our Mother Earth is so beautiful and we have not loved or respected her enough and worse even we have not learned yet to love and respect each other. But we will learn one day, the sooner the better. Love, Margherita |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Marghertia...Thans so much for reading this piece and as always thanks for your sweet reply. Your words of wisdom are so true. Hopefully this has been just a trial run and we can still change the way we treat our world...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Haf_Alive Member
since 2011-09-04
Posts 56High in the Sky |
very real and valid concerns that you express. with words like this, i'm sure your legacy will speak for itself! so go, enjoy life! excellent read, very talented. thanks HAF |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Paul, I like your poetry my friend. JL  Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Wow, Paul, you came back to writing with a great piece of poetry. So good. Thank you for sharing. Alison |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Winds of time will always blow seeds of today into tomorrow These lines really stood out for me in the beautiful whole. *S* |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
HAF ...Glad you cared enough for this piece to reply. Thanks so very much...Paul JL...Your reply brings a warm smile to my face. Glad you liked it. Thanks my friend...Paul Alison...Thanks dear lady for your encourging reply. I really have been in a slump lately. It feels good to be able to write every now and then...Paul suthern...Thanks for your kind words. I really appreciate you reading and replying...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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