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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Red Lexis Believing that I had Miko figured out I let my guard down and left the keys to my Lexis laying around. The next morning my wallet, my keys and my red Lexis were not around, and upon yelling Miko's name, nary a sound. My cell phone wasn't touched at all, I took a quick shower and gave Miko a call. "Come in Miko, wherever you are, I miss you Miko and I miss my car." Just then she appeared with a bag full of eggs, chocolate milk and beer. Way to go Miko, I cheered! JamesLee 03May 2011 |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Cute. Misdirection. Had me. ~ I went to a restaurant that serves "breakfast at any time" / I ordered French Toast during the Renaissance. ~ |
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dreamgal Member
since 2011-03-17
Posts 442 |
I liked it. It took a different turn then i expected but it was clever. Dreamgal |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
James Sometimes we worry for good reasons, other times, not..This time it worked out for you...I like poems with a "twist", this was a good one, one of the times you worried for nothing..:-) Hope you always have that luck. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
so vivid and fresh, what a story for me to love...Great write. yann |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you JerryPat, dreamgal, ice and 2islander2 for the wonderful responses...James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you for the smiles, dear James. Sometimes we fret without a good reason, but our thought patterns "deviate" our minds.  A cute write. Love, Margherita |
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