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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

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West Coast

0 posted 2011-05-03 12:30 PM

they say of a bin
that it is a container
usually with a lid

and of laden how it is heavy
loaded down with things
and even over loaded sometimes

so the bin was emptied
into the sea of forgetfulness
what was laden was lightened

and these words shall remain free

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daark

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

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Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2011-05-03 12:39 PM

You said it!

Dark Stranger
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West Coast

2 posted 2011-05-03 12:44 PM

thanks lady..

Balladeer

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3 posted 2011-05-03 01:06 PM

perfectly said, Stranger!

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

4 posted 2011-05-03 01:07 PM

Very good, Sir. Thoughtful...

and direct.

Dark Stranger
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West Coast

5 posted 2011-05-03 01:16 PM

Deer..thanks amigo

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ms sun, thanks lady friend

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

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South Louisiana

6 posted 2011-05-03 04:21 PM

Good.

~ I went to a restaurant that serves "breakfast at any time" / I ordered French Toast during the Renaissance. ~

Dark Stranger
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West Coast

7 posted 2011-05-03 04:40 PM

thanks jp

OwlSA
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Durban, South Africa

8 posted 2011-05-03 05:12 PM

Extremely clever, interesting and true, Dark. I celebrate the last line.

Owl

Dark Stranger
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West Coast

9 posted 2011-05-03 05:52 PM

thank you lady Owl

Alison

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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

10 posted 2011-05-04 12:23 PM

I'd tip my hat to you if I were wearing a hat. So how about if I just cop a feel instead. Seriously, if I have to be serious ... seriously, you said it well, Dark man.

Ali-san

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

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Eternity

11 posted 2011-05-04 02:31 AM

quote:
what was laden was lightened

I love your take on this ...

your mind in action is fascinating always.

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

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West Coast

12 posted 2011-05-04 06:01 AM

ms ali-san..oh my...cop a feel? can you say that here? Can I hold you to it? thanks babe

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ms mar..thank you lady friend..

Martie

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13 posted 2011-05-04 06:35 PM

DS...I like the way you think.

serenity blaze
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14 posted 2011-05-04 07:18 PM

You are incredibly good, D.

Ever your fan,

k

dreamgal
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since 2011-03-17

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15 posted 2011-05-04 08:07 PM

I always love your poetry and this is no
exception as its always intriging.

Dreamgal

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

16 posted 2011-05-08 09:53 PM

To the top...James

Dark Stranger
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17 posted 2011-05-09 05:55 AM

ms martie, thanks lil neighbor

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serene one...thanks lady friend...your fan too.

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dreamgal, thank you so much

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JM, thank you for the reads

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