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Sometimes hope is like a curse
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Sometimes hope is like a curse |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams 
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Sometimes hope is like a curse The trees grow Amongst the decaying floor There's a stale, thick must Machines growl serrated blades tear off flesh But there are no screams Now sapplings Ache on the empty nude floor The sun pierces down -Juju |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Again you offer us incredible visions which induce depth of thought. Extremely well done. Love, Margherita |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
exquisitely profound write, beautifully phrased...nice write |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Seems Japanese . |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
The style is a very poor hiku -Juju |
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Dawn Brink Junior Member
since 2011-04-28
Posts 44South Africa |
Beautiful, powerful words... I'm discovering lovely poetry in this forum! |
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Bob K Member Elite
since 2007-11-03
Posts 4208 |
Dear Juju, In one of the variations of the Pandora myth, she managed to close the lid of the box before the last and most horrible of the evils of the world escaped, and she was able to keep it contained, at least to some extent. The most terrible of these evils was named Hope. It seems you’ve come across one of those painful archetypal insights and made it your own, always at best a mixed blessing. Thank heavens you were able to put it into such moving form. Bob Kaven |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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