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Ever Changing Life
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Ever Changing Life |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States 
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Ever Changing Life By Paul Wilson From child to young boy transformation takes place over night From young boy to adolescent transformation takes place overnight Questions no one wants to answer where do they come from and why Feelings I can’t explain where do they come from and why From young boy to young man changes take place again From young man to adult changes take place again Priorities different than before no more running around Married life we must adjust no more running around Dreams of yesterday remembered touch my heart tenderly Dreams of a lifetime with you touch my heart tenderly Children of our own to raise questions to be answered Dreams of tomorrow put on hold questions to be answered Chasing rainbows hand and hand wishing upon a falling star Bring me back to yesterday wishing upon a falling star Hopes and dreams all we’ve got holding onto each other We spend our twilight years together holding onto each other ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ Paul [This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (04-26-2011 10:45 AM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Paul, this is an exceptionally poignant write. Beautifully done and with a content that shows both your wisdom and the beauty of your heart. Enjoyed it greatly. Love, Margherita  |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Marghertia...Thanks for reading and your very sweet reply. I tried to experiment with this one, by making the 2nd and 4th line of each stanza the same words but they relate to the 1st and 3rd lines in that stanza. Thanks Again...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Yes, dear Paul, I have noticed the special form. You have succeeded perfectly. I am sure others will enjoy this work too. Love, Margherita |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
first, let me say how much I loved the ending...but I have to admit...I was captured by the format...cool |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
steavenr...So glad you took time to read and thanks for your kind reply. Glad you liked the neding, it sort of brings everything together. Maybe a new style of poetry got its begenning here. LOL Thanks Again...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Glad to see you writing again, Paul. Ida |
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