Open Poetry #47 |
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The price |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa ![]() |
The price of oil and fuel goes up yet love's value so diminished and the warlords prosper more than ere they've done before. It's a world beset by trials that suffer so the earth to burst and the sea to vent its anger indiscriminately. And in amongst this spiral the energy of you and I comes in second to the norms established by the unaware. Not today, tomorrow, or next week, next month, year will energy en mass rise up ~ but energy is such to be unseen, unheard, unknown, until the most amazing shock changes what we know. Wide awake, hair singed and burnt, and who will care of oil and fuel when the price of love has risen high and our coffers empty, spent? Helen / 23 April 2011 |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Whoa!!! Dynamite, Helen. What an in-your-face piece of work. You managed to parlay the insanity of the world to the unease of personal feeling between lovers. Not an easy task, but you have succeeded big time. Yes. ~ A lion will not cheat on his wife, but a Tiger Wood. ~ |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Did I do all that, Jerry? ![]() Helen |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Yes, you did all that! And you did it in your special style I've come to enjoy so much. Bless your heart! |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thank you so much, Lori. Bless you too, dear one. Helen |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Such a precious, effective write, dear Helen. A great reminder. And to think that the energy of love is renewable endlessly .... Love, Margherita ![]() |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Powerful statement about what is important and what is not, Helen. Ida |
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