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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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My Lord of Chaos Lead me into temptation Then get me out quick |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Ha! Good one! Just a little bit... then outta there! Lori |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yep. You got it, Lori. You seem to be my only reader these days. Maybe I need to back off for a while. Or good. ~ Don't insult the alligator till after you cross the river. ~ |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Jerry - the trouble with just a "taste" is that it could leave one wanting more. As they say, be careful of what you wish for but we could all do with a little bit of "something" just to spice up life.  Helen |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
"be careful of what you wish for" I guess you are right, Helen. Maybe I need to reword it. Thanks for your input. ~ Don't insult the alligator till after you cross the river. ~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
A whole lot of truth in your little twist. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you, Blues. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. ~ Don't insult the alligator till after you cross the river. ~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This made me smile, dear Jerry. I always wondered and still wonder why on Earth we ask our God to not lead us into temptation. It could mean He really loves to do that  and to see how we react. And then there is much to ponder also over the concept of sin.... what we really must avoid is to hurt others and that's the parameter I prefer.Great one. Love, Margherita |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you, Margherita. You bring up good points. I was just having fun with words. ~ A lion will not cheat on his wife, but a Tiger Wood. ~ |
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Word Weaver Member
since 2011-03-06
Posts 437California, USA |
Love it Jerry! |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you, Marcia. ~ A lion will not cheat on his wife, but a Tiger Wood. ~ |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
exactly what I should like, thanks jerry for the superb write. yann |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you, yann. ~ A lion will not cheat on his wife, but a Tiger Wood. ~ |
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