Open Poetry #47 |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
there is nothing i, you, we can say now that words have become something close to an impossibility would it were we could break out of this silence i'm unsure if i could bare the words you would say nothing is left to share or should i say i, you, we have forgotten what it's like to share There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Faith, this hurts and I do understand the underlying anxiety. Very effective in its melancholic perspective. Love, Margherita |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Although it is difficult, what matters most now is setting fire to that bridge after you cross it. ~ Don't insult the alligator till after you cross the river. ~ |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
It's always best to tell it like it is. faithmairee. Ida |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
This is a great write, my friend...well done!! j. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
You have put into words well the collapse of communication (ironic yes?)Well done! Lori |
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