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Insanity.. |
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dreamgal Member
since 2011-03-17
Posts 442 |
Hell lives in dark hallways, where insanity wreaks havoc on logic. Where voices whisper in the darkness of minds, and eyes stare with paranoia. There dirty fingers claw and scratch at invisible walls, trying to escape their own madness. While others cover their ears to block out the hopeless screams of desperation. All the while wandering aimlessly in there torn and urine soaked nightgowns, forever haunted by an insanity only they can see.. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
OMG! That was totaly intense! One flew right inside my cuckoo's nest! Great write! Lori |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
My kind of poem, dreamgal. The demons within the walls, or our thoughts, which are one and the same. Liked it! Yep. ~ At the siege of Vienna in 1683 Islam seemed poised to overrun Christian Europe. We are in a new phase of a very old war. ~ |
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dreamgal Member
since 2011-03-17
Posts 442 |
Glad you liked it Jerry and Lori, I thought it about time to write something real dark. Instead of my usual smily face poetry. Lol I guess i got carried away! Dreamgal |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hi dreamgal, this is chilly and so vivid, superbly written as a true look on crazyness and horror which goes along, an excellent write that made me think and surprise..Thanks for the excellent share. yann |
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dreamgal Member
since 2011-03-17
Posts 442 |
2islander your welcome! And thank you for the compliments its greatly appreciated! Glad you enjoyed. Dreamgal |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Superb, Dreamgal! Owl |
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