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faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

0 posted 2011-04-11 12:08 PM

it wasn't hqrd to fall for you
it's such an easy thing to do
i close my eyes and fantasize
imagining a love so true

i wove a story that would
make shakespere sigh
a tender love story
just to make you laugh and cry
i gave you qualities you didn't possess
it was a bit insane i must admit

you say you don't know how
i captured your heart but
you claim it is for keeps
you're not sure how i took control
or knocked you right off of your feet

i wove a story that would
make shakespere sigh
a tender love story
just to make you laugh and cry
i gave you qualities you didn't possess
it was a bit insane i must admit

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

dreamgal
Member

since 2011-03-17

Posts 442

1 posted 2011-04-11 12:59 PM

Boy faith your on a roll here 3 for 3! All
of them i enjoyed.

Dreamgal
*smiles*

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

2 posted 2011-04-11 03:13 AM

That's so sweet of you to say. I'm glad you enjoyed them.

Faith

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

3 posted 2011-04-11 08:58 AM

I don't know about this Willy boy character, but it made me sigh...

Very pretty Faith!

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2011-04-11 09:11 AM

Was this a truly story that was woven just for effect, or was it the truth?

~ Why do we drive on a parkway and park on a driveway? ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

5 posted 2011-04-11 11:09 AM

Good one! I like the way you did the begining and ending.

Lori

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2011-04-11 12:30 PM

That's what I love about having an active and highly creative imagination ~ which most poets have in abundance! ~ and you're no exception! Everything that we could possibly want in this world, we can have! ~ even if but for a few moments!

Linda

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

7 posted 2011-04-15 10:27 AM

Thank you all for your wonderful remarks. I appreciate them.

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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