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FrankWalley
New Member

since 2011-01-13

Posts 2

0 posted 2011-01-13 03:18 AM

Do you want to know what’s bothering me?

Let me tell you what's bothering me...

I love you.

I love the way you look.

I love the way you look at me.

I love to say your name.

I love to walk in front of you, beside you, even behind you.

I love your amazing eyes and how they top off your sultry smile.

I love the way I feel when I hear you laugh.

I love how you stand out in a crowd.

I love the things you have to say.

I love how you can look sexy, even when you’re angry.

I love the way you breathe when you fall asleep in my arms.

I love that no matter how hard I try to get you, I will never fully get you.

I love how I can't have a bad day when you're around.

I love how we feel when I can’t tell where you end and I begin.

I love most of all that you are my friend.

Finally I love that someday, I will find you again.

But today wasn't that day,

and it bothers me...

~ Frank Walley

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

1 posted 2011-01-13 05:35 AM

Slammy! The end busted my chops! Awesome!

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

2 posted 2011-01-13 06:11 AM

Welcome to PIP.

Don't let it bother you, there is always tomorrow

Enjoyed.

-Trina
Be thankful for every person who has caused you pain. In that moment, they became your assistant of growth.

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

3 posted 2011-01-13 06:53 AM

Well, drat!

Suicidal twin kills sister by mistake!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2011-01-13 07:59 AM

I've met a person or two like that...

Welcome to Passions! Please check
your email for a Very Special Greeting!

" It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

5 posted 2011-01-13 06:05 PM

ouch...wasn't quite ready for your very cool ending...but loved the journey there...welcome...nice first

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

6 posted 2011-01-13 11:24 PM

I really liked this. Welcome to PiP.

Alison

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

7 posted 2011-01-14 02:28 AM

Yep, you set me up too.

However, it's a superb poem of love's qualities and how easily they can escape the reception they should recieve.

Much enjoyed!

Eric

Love does not look after it's own interests.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

8 posted 2011-01-14 10:27 AM

Knocked me out too! I loved it!
Lori

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