Open Poetry #47 |
![]() ![]() |
You Don't Know |
![]() ![]() ![]() |
Lilee Junior Member
since 2011-04-03
Posts 16U.S.A |
~ You don’t know how scared I am You think that you can count to ten See what I have written in pen But you don’t know how scared I am You think you know how hard my hands shake Written on these pages are my mistakes You don’t know how scared I am You think you know how hard it is to cry And for you these years are passing by And you don’t know how scared I am You see my eyes and remember when I always thought you were my friend You don’t know how scared I am ~*~*~ |
||
© Copyright 2011 Lilee - All Rights Reserved | |||
Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I get the feeling that something is quite wrong, dear Lilee. You conveyed your fear very powerfully in this well written piece. If this is about you, take a deep breath and love yourself, trusting that the outcome will be for your highest good. Love, Margherita |
||
Lilee Junior Member
since 2011-04-03
Posts 16U.S.A |
Thank you for your truly helpful and kind words, Margherita It is about me, and how scared I am of the future and the unknown. ~*~*~ |
||
faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
a very sad and moving poem...i pray all turns out well There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
||
JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I can promise you that things always look worse than the eventually become. Trust in yourself. ~ If you don't want gays in the military, make the uniforms ugly. ~ |
||
dreamgal Member
since 2011-03-17
Posts 442 |
Lilie, I thought your write was good. I also hope things turn out well for you. Keep writing about your feelings it is healing. It is for me anyway. Good luck friend! *smiles* Dreamgal |
||
OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I would have emailed this to you, Lilee, but you don't have the anonymous link to your email address available to us. Jerry (JerryPat) has written you a poem (called Life's Road). I have thrown in my tuppence ha'penny worth of well-meaning (though perhaps it won't help) advice to you in my reply to his poem. I am sure it will make you happy to read his poem, knowing that somebody cares enough to try to help. Owl |
||
Lilee Junior Member
since 2011-04-03
Posts 16U.S.A |
Thank you all so much. ~*~*~ |
||
![]() ![]() |
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
![]() ![]() ![]() |
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |