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Cinderella Moment |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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On blue stationary I've penned my thoughts caressing the silver lining trimmed around the edge. Not until I met you did the cursive bend so beautifully with bold strokes and angles lifting off the page. You have dotted my eye and crossed my heart with a simple elegance gracing me in the limelight. Consider this my thank you note for granting me a Cinderella moment sealed with a kiss on blue stationary. r/w |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
...if that doesn't add 'spark' somethings wrong with him. Wonderful done Blues. j. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thanks jwesley, I sure do appreciate that. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Like the new photo. Love the poem. Your lines are always filled with seemingly effortless prose, but this one is especially so. Enjoyed it. ~ If you don't want gays in the military, make the uniforms ugly. ~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Hey thanks JP for always being so nice to me. btw, promise not to change my pic ever again, I'm not that self absorbed but every pic looks so blurry to me, or maybe my eye sight is going going gone...ya think?? |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
Its amazing how words on a page grow wings and lift off, when hearts are heard. Very soft and sweet poetry . |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I think that glass slipper fits just perfectly, Blues. Ida |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
You wear the Cinderella finery well. I'll just follow along to shine your glass slippers and read your poetry. A [This message has been edited by Alison (04-07-2011 10:38 AM).] |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms blue...it is always a pleasure to watch you work... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This, dear Lori, is so captivatingly romantic. May the Prince in question always assure you this radiance, poetic Princess. Love, Margherita  |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Beautifully romantic, Bluesy. May you have many more Cinderella moments.  Helen |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Absolutely lovely, Lori. Owl |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Emma, thank you for your sweet reply. Ida~ Yea, the shoe doesn't really fit, but the idea looks nice ...in my dreams. Thank you. Alison~ You're funny and always make me smile. Thanks for reading. Dark Dude~ I'm not a ms blue, I'm a big baby blue... doncha know!!? Thank you mister~ Margherita~ Even your replies are poetic and warm my heart to no end. Thank you always~ Thank you Helen~ Those moments are indeed my favorite ones. Lady Owl~ I am so happy you stopped by to read. Thanks a lot. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lori...Almost a lost art...the graceful hand held ink to paper of loving thoughts. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Hello there, it's always so nice to see you here. Thank you so much, Martie~ |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Dear Lori, I’m trying to think of a luckier guy in the world then this prince of yours, but I just can’t. How could I? I know I keep saying this, but your poetry really just keeps getting more beautiful each time you write another one. This is by far, my favorite of yours, you ever wrote. I would love to comment on your new picture, but I’m afraid I would just come across as a babbling idiot lol… let me just say, it is beyond gorgeous, and you grow lovelier with each passing moment. Love this dear friend, almost as much, as you. Richard xxoo |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
fine Romanticism! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Dear Richy~ You are much too kind. Thank you always for everything, every word of praise you give so freely means a great deal to me. I am always tickled to know that you have been here and that your eyes laid eyes on me. Throwing my arms up to the sky, blowing you a kiss and feeling so greatful. x/o Thank you DreamPoet~ I suppose I am a romantic at heart, although I wasn't always that way. Glad I buried my mean streak for the most part, not much lights my fuse anymore, except for an unfortunate few. ha!!  |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Awww Lori, I was wondering where those blue lucious lip prints on my cheek came from... ... I was hoping, they were from you.. Thank you sweetie, a kiss never felt soo good. Right back attcha love... Muuaahh! xx/oo |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
this is so romantic and has such a tender feel to it...very beautifully written There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
read this the other night and thought I had left a comment on it...read it again and enjoyed it even more...it is almost magical...nicely done |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Lori, you truly are a Cinderella and may all your moments be magical Cinderella ones. btw, you look as pretty as a picture, so to speak, in your new photo! I always enjoy your poetry. You're in a class all your own!  Don't take any 'wooden' slippers! Only the highest crystal is worthy of you! Love and a big hug, Linda xo |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thank you for the rosy blush, Richy~ Faith~ That's so nice of you to say so, thank you for being here. steavenr~ Your reply makes me very happy, and my efforts worthwhile. Thank you kind Sir~ Linda~ You and your replies give me the warm fuzzies. You are the sweetest angel ever. Thank you for sharing the love and for being so kind. |
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