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of velvet and oceans
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of velvet and oceans |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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velvet is in her eyes today not the colors but the sighs how the hands move across there making those voices with fingers and she closes them for a moment as if she is swallowing liquid that was left from a kiss song she played with her lips for hours she is mysterious now in departing tiptoes without her heels on but knowing my eyes know her pore by pore keeping them in count and then she turns again in nothing and runs to my willing inclinations just to straddle one more lifetime and leave me drenched in her tides ocean is in her eyes today ______________ daark |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
... this leaves me speechless and lingering in an ocean of emotions, due to the perception of your amazing poetic brilliance. Dear D., you are so deeply inspired. Love, Margherita  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar..thank you sweet lady friend.. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Let's hear it for ocean in the eyes...well done. j. |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Mmmm. You make me long for the beach and tasting its salt on my tongue. Very nice, Dark One. Ali-san |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
jwes..thanks for the read ______________ ms ali-san, I think the ocean would enjoy your cold toes.. thanks little one |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You're so smooth, dark dude. Loving your wet velvet touch~ |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"a kiss song she played with her lips" great phrase...such a very cool write...thoroughly enjoyed |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
babyblue...thank you for the eyes and smiles ______________ steavenr, thanks so much guy! |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
I also like the lines Steaven highlighted but then again all your lines are great. Enjoyed this so much. Helen |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Love the beauty and the playfulness in this, from across the ocean. Owl |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Helen, thank you so much lady!! _______________ lady Owl, thank you for the touch and smile ms |
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