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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa 
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AWARENESS 31 March 2011 Plucking sunbeams like a harp making music that colours dragonfly wings and floats autumn leaves on slow river smiles Owl |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Often wondered how those dragonflies were the beneficiary of such beautiful wings. I wonder no more. I can also understand the line "slow river smiles." Nice work. ~ If you don't want gays in the military, make the uniforms ugly. ~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Owl your poetry is so full of peace and beauty if you could put it in a pill or smoke it, it would become the new drug of choice for the world! (wouldn't that be cool?) Your spirit is a light that illuminates and warms us all. Bless your heart. Lori |
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dreamgal Member
since 2011-03-17
Posts 442 |
Owl, I enjoyed this very much. I second what Lori said, your poetry is very calming, thanks for sharing. Dreamgal *smiles* |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
now this is an especially grand-fine impression! ... great 'write' (wonderful 'read') !! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Your poetry always has such an elegance about it, Diana. Ida |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Delighted giggles, Jerry, about the dragonfly wings and slow river smiles at the slow river smile part! Thank you for your enchanting reply! Lori, I am intrigued by your first sentence; stunned and honoured by your second; and grateful and heart-warmed by your third! Thank you. Thank you, Dreamgal. I am very happy about that. I love that I am bringing peace and calm to you and Lori and perhaps others. Thank you, Bruce. I am glad that you enjoyed it so much. What a lovely thing to say, Ida! You honour me (again!). Smiles. Thank you. Owl |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
Nature is perfect isn't she? How everything is just as it should be, without interference. Much enjoyed ! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Lots of peaceful images conjured through such few words. Well done Diana! Eric |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
you are the master of beautiful words...bowing with bouquets & shouting brava, brava |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Your poetic soul manifests in all its brightness here, dear Diana! Wonderful. Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
lady Owl.. with your colors and romantica here I can also see that little grin of mischief..enjoyed you lady |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
a beautiful poem as usual...Owl, i enjoyed this one a lot  There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Yes, Emma, you are so right. Thank you for enjoying it! Thank you, Eric, for your kind words. Smiles. Steaven, you wow me with your reply! Thank you. Thank you Margherita. What a beautiful thing to say! You are such a kind, beautiful soul, yourself! Smiles. Thank you, Dark Stranger. I usually hide my romantic and mischievous side! How did you find it? Smiles. Thank you, Faith, especially for the “as usual”! I am glad you enjoyed it. Owl |
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