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in a moment of temptation
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in a moment of temptation |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA 
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in a moment of temptation i prayed for my salvation lured in by your attention and absolute perfection to do something very foolish knowing better but not to do it something seemingly so harmless for your flirting never quit i have no right to love you, sweets i would never claim i did but you told me that you loved me still my love for you i hid There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Temptation really can play with our choices can't it? Very nicely put across Faith. I enjoyed the read. Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Take our chances time after time. Nothing is a given, it is true some people do wrong. Still, until we take that chance, how will we know? Nice poetry. ~ OK, so what's the speed of dark? ~ |
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dreamgal Member
since 2011-03-17
Posts 442 |
my reply is below |
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dreamgal Member
since 2011-03-17
Posts 442 |
ahhh tempation, better to resist then to regret... good poem. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Words to the wise Faith...Some of us have a terrible time resisting temptation...I'm a sucker for chocolate and doughnuts etc.. Lori |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Yep and I can't resist a People magazine. I tell myself, "step away from the magazines, Alison. Just step away." But, it never works. There is one beside me as I write. Seriously, I like this faithmariree. Alison |
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