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OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

0 posted 2011-03-26 02:07 PM

VELVET SILENCE
26 March 2011

Long light reflections
at the enchanting hour
flow into swirling shadows
of pas de deux woodland grace
and which is you
and which is me
doesn’t matter
any more
for what counts
is the beauty
of the trance.

Owl

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2011-03-26 02:12 PM

Ooooooooo,this is absolutely stunning, you romance the written word so exquisitely.

Lovely lovely work, Lady OWL~

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2011-03-26 03:05 PM

This is a gem, I agree with Bluesy. You created a wondrous atmosphere, dear Diana.

Love,
Margherita

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

3 posted 2011-03-26 03:18 PM

Yes, the beauty of the trance is so relaxing....It's appreciation for the true beauty in the world, a beauty that we sometimes take for granted but never should.
Excellent Diana!

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

4 posted 2011-03-26 11:42 PM

It's a special person who can recognize the beauty of the trance; and an even more special person who can write about it. You are special.

Alison

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

5 posted 2011-03-29 12:05 PM

Thank you, Blue.  You make me smile very happily!

Thank you, Margherita for your lovely reply.

Thank you, Eric, for your kind words.  You are right – it is the trance in which the dance held the pair, and a metaphor for the beauty of the world.

Thank you, Alison.  I don’t know about being special – but you certainly make me feel special, but then you are so special yourself!  Smiles.

Owl

Klassy Lassy
Member Elite

since 2005-06-28

Posts 2187
Oregon

6 posted 2011-03-29 11:24 PM

Oh, I so like the feeling of immersion with another in an enchanted tryst with nature. Another gorgeous penning, Owl, and I've a yen to wander the serenity, too. There is a sense of timelessness about this one...

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

7 posted 2011-03-29 11:57 PM

Thank you, Karen for your very kind words. You SO got what I was saying! I am glad you enjoyed it so much.

Owl

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