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Open Poetry #47

Portrait

A Beautiful Disaster
Member

since 2007-01-13

Posts 409

0 posted 2011-03-22 03:18 PM

I'll paint your sweet portrait with tightly shut eyes
With pleasure whenever you ask.
Though hands ever shaking and colder than ice
Do find it a difficult task.

I'll cherish the portrait and hang it above
My empty not warm enough bed
To guard all the secrets of mystery love
And clear the mess in my head.

The mirror that's placed on the opposite wall
Will certainly add to its charm,
My room and your portrait will turn to one whole -
This place will incur no more harm.

dreamgal
Member

since 2011-03-17

Posts 442

1 posted 2011-03-22 04:29 PM

Very romantic poem, I loved it!

lumina
New Member

since 2011-03-21

Posts 7
california

2 posted 2011-03-22 10:40 PM

i like this poem. the portrait idea was.......great.

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