Open Poetry #47 |
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A Cherished Moment |
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Anoo Member
since 2011-01-23
Posts 55UK |
In a fleeting moment of intimacy our eyes met each other Our gazes infused; the world around us faded to a faint backdrop as I succumbed to your lingering look. A wave of radiance carried me away to a crystal maze loosing myself amongst the crystal walls of your gaze where passions gleam, I did not mind not knowing a way out. I saw myself in your eyes; bewildered and insanely falling into the spell of your enchanted gaze. I’d travel to the past for miles in time If only I can get lost in your eyes once again. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
That's the best kind of "getting lost" indeed! Lovely! Love, Margherita |
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dreamgal Member
since 2011-03-17
Posts 442 |
So beautifully written ahh the magic of it all. Well done! |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"I did not mind not knowing a way out" ...a sure sign of something special...nice write |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Nicely done, enjoyed so...bump! Kat >^..^< |
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