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Open Poetry #47

Hidden soul..

dreamgal
Member

since 2011-03-17

Posts 442

0 posted 2011-03-19 07:03 PM

The mask your wearing is worn and drab
you thought is was working
but now I see thru it from the wear and
tear over the years

No need for a new one
for none of them are quite
attractive on you.

without it one can see
you have a remarkable air
about you

The real you I wish you
would display it more often
dust it off please

Take me out on your arm
I would be pleased to show
youoff my dear
Your intellect is brilliant
& im charmed by your wit
with out your mask that is
the one you think is pleasing
only reveals a piece of you

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

1 posted 2011-03-29 11:40 PM

I like the way that you expressed how the masks wear out and really are not needed. Nicely done.

Alison

dreamgal
Member

since 2011-03-17

Posts 442

2 posted 2011-03-30 12:00 PM

Thank you Allison I appreciate it I forgot I wrote this it its been awhile. Thanks again!

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

3 posted 2011-03-30 12:40 PM

What a beautiful, gracious and kind way to offer sincere and honest encouragement to someone to be the wonderful man he really is. This is a tribute not only to him, but to the person you are, too, dreamgal.

Owl

dreamgal
Member

since 2011-03-17

Posts 442

4 posted 2011-03-30 08:15 AM

Thank YOU Owl for your kind words, that too is a testament of your graciousness.

Dreamgal

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