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Open Poetry #47

Reflection

Legacy
Member

since 2011-01-08

Posts 60
Louisiana

0 posted 2011-01-11 10:27 AM

Look into yourself
Would you buy what you can see
Heartbreaks are for sale.

A black cat ran in front of me tonight. I'm not worried. They don't bother Warlocks.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2011-01-11 10:34 AM

Are they cheaper by the dozen? Good write
Lori

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

2 posted 2011-01-11 11:10 AM

Me and my reflection don't get along...one of us is a liar....but I'm not sure who

Enjoyed.

-Trina
Be thankful for every person who has caused you pain. In that moment, they became your assistant of growth.

Legacy
Member

since 2011-01-08

Posts 60
Louisiana

3 posted 2011-01-11 11:30 AM

I might be able to make a sale out of a dozen heartbreaks, and still have a few left over, Lori.

Trina, I absolutely understand where you are coming from. Thank you for understanding where I am coming from.

A black cat ran in front of me tonight. I'm not worried. They don't bother Warlocks.

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

4 posted 2011-01-11 10:26 PM

a profound and thought-provoking poem....i love it!

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

Balladeer

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

5 posted 2011-01-11 10:34 PM

I looked for myself
In the eyes of all my friends
Couldn't find me there.

Legacy
Member

since 2011-01-08

Posts 60
Louisiana

6 posted 2011-01-12 06:27 AM

faith, I thank you for your nice thoughts.

That is a lonesome feeling, Balladeer, and thanks for the understanding.

A black cat ran in front of me tonight. I'm not worried. They don't bother Warlocks.

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