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Broken Heart |
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dreamgal Member
since 2011-03-17
Posts 442 |
As we walk the beach He turns to me softness in his eyes A carress on my cheek no need to speak A teardrop never lies I turn away no need to stay Those words I cannot bear I turn to flee he chases me my screams now fill the air my heart is racing I cannot breath my thoughts are all askew where am i going i ask myself Where am I running to? For you cant escape when your heart breaks theres no place to run to For nothing will shield you from the pain its something we must go thru |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I have no idea why this poem did not get any replies. It must have gotten lost in the shuffle and PiP pace. I enjoyed it. Alison |
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dreamgal Member
since 2011-03-17
Posts 442 |
awww thanks Allison, i gotta admit i was suprised to see a reply after all this time. But i really appreciate it. Thanks, Dreamgal *smiles* |
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Fabiani Member
since 2006-05-12
Posts 123Mesa, Az |
There is no escape from heartbreak this is true. but there is that cliche that rings true it is better to have loved and well u know the rest. I enjoyed this |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ah, yeah sometimes our poems get lost in the shuffle. sometime people are having a bad day and just don't feel like responding. This is pure love/pain/escapism. I like the way it went from the softness in his eyes to abject terror. Good stuff. ~ Why do we drive on a parkway and park on a driveway? ~ |
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dreamgal Member
since 2011-03-17
Posts 442 |
Thank you fabiani, and thank you Jerry! Dreamgal |
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