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katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

0 posted 2011-03-15 11:14 PM

DREAMING

A dream is but
A song unknown
Until relinquished sung
Dreams awake to sing
Melodies hymn
Sweet lilting song
Of lover sated sigh

Dreaming
Sweet illusions
Fulfilling tempted wish
Dreams awake to dance
Raptures ballard
Passions sweet embrace
Of lovers sated sigh

~*~ To live is to love, to love is to live ~*~

Anoo
Member

since 2011-01-23

Posts 55
UK

1 posted 2011-03-16 06:24 AM

I love the softness in your poem. It sounds gentle as a sweet dream itself. My favourite lines being;
'Sweet lilting song
Of lover sated sigh'

Great verses

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

2 posted 2011-03-16 06:43 AM

Thanks Anoo for your sweet reply.
Kat >^..^<

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2011-03-16 11:03 AM

Dreams do come true
Maybe for you
And for me too
We shan't be blue

~ My grandmother is over eighty and still doesn't need glasses. Drinks right out of the bottle. ~

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

4 posted 2011-03-16 05:41 PM

Dreaming
Sweet illusions
Fulfilling tempted wish
Dreams awake to dance
Raptures ballard
Passions sweet embrace
Of lovers sated sigh

Oh my, Karen!

What can I say, that was dreamy...

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

5 posted 2011-03-16 07:19 PM

Thanks JP and Richy, I really appreciate you checking out my poems and commenting! I love hearing from you both!
Kat >^..^<
x/o

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2011-03-16 07:47 PM

Just a little purr, Kat...to let you
know that I truly listen to all of
my dreams...and I dream a lot!

Enjoyed, and thank you!

twistedpup
Member

since 2011-02-25

Posts 115

7 posted 2011-03-17 10:00 AM

thank you for sharing, this poem felt like a dream to read.

*hugs*

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

8 posted 2011-03-21 12:31 PM

I am so happy that I stopped in to read. This is splendid.

xoxoxo
A

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

9 posted 2011-03-21 12:54 PM

Very nice and captivating!

Love,
Margherita

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