Open Poetry #47 |
What is a Dream |
katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
WHAT IS A DREAM What is a dream... But an unsung song May you always be singing Can I sing along To share a dream We'll sing together Our hearts in tune Melody of love forever What a beautiful dream Your dream is my song Two hearts in harmony Singing, dreaming, together we belong I dreamt a dream of only you And I woke up singing ~*~ To live is to love, to love is to live ~*~ |
||
© Copyright 2011 Karen A . Blackburn - All Rights Reserved | |||
2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
true words are the best, thanks for the lovely ans solacing share. yann |
||
katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Yann- thanks for the look! Kat >^..^< |
||
JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Beautiful premise for a poem, Kat. One that I wouldn't have came up with in like forever. Just shows me where your heart is. ~ My grandmother is over eighty and still doesn't need glasses. Drinks right out of the bottle. ~ |
||
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Now I feel like singing! Tra la la ~ la la! May your dreams always be sweet and be a reflection of your reality! EA |
||
Word Weaver Member
since 2011-03-06
Posts 437California, USA |
Absolutely beautiful. Write on new poet! |
||
Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Maybe the dream was actually real and that's why you woke up signing. Enjoyed! Helen |
||
katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Thanks everyone for checking out my poem and the nice comments. Keep dreaming and singing! Kat >^..^< |
||
Daddy Goose38 Member
since 2010-09-04
Posts 430obama's a rice paper tiger |
Ohhhh, Karen Dear, that is so gentle and so sweet. Jaime |
||
ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Enjoyed your poem katahdin, Ms. E |
||
JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I really like this. The poem says much, and is catchy, like a song, as you read it. ~ I knew drugs weren't the answer. I just had to find out for myself. ~ |
||
Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You sing this dream beautifully, dear Karen! Love, Margherita |
||
jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Nice write, my friend - perfect last two lines. j. |
||
OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
What a wonderful way to wake up, Kat! Much enjoyed. Owl |
||
suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I liked this very much... especially the last 2 lines! |
||
Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
So very nice. I love tune and the lyrics. A |
||
Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
So cute....I dream alot, mostly vivid dreams that are confusing, maybe your poem will bring me happy dreams...take care! ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
||
⇧ top of page ⇧ | ||
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |