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Three Ripples (a repost for Japan)
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Three Ripples (a repost for Japan) |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows 
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I gone without warning tide ebbing beyond despair water’s cleansing wrath II ancient Tsunami angry god in ocean’s form awakened sleeper III dreaming living dreams humanity reminded all is fragile thought ©2004, 2011 by icebox |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Well now, I do believe I found a guy who knows how to shut me up.  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, dear Charly, for this wise and timely contribution. It is exactly as you say. Love, Margherita |
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Word Weaver Member
since 2011-03-06
Posts 437California, USA |
Magnificant! Such a terrible tragedy it was and still is for many. Haiku is a skill I never have been able to master but you've done it perfectly. Loud applause from a new member of your gallery of fans. |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
You captured Japan's tragedy with your Haikus. Nicely done! Kat >^..^< |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Your ripples are lovely in the wake of such tragedy and devastation. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dear Box of Ice, your "Ripples" ring with resounding truth. Well done!  EA |
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Anoo Member
since 2011-01-23
Posts 55UK |
Timely writing. Lovely metaphorical use of lang. |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
Very good. A cohesive triple with the best saved for last... though these are in reverse order as per the real life event? |
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