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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Do not look at me when I shine, I am an unlucky star without track, I do not know your nights of ice Nor your most born sadnesses. If you are Three Kings or an other one Do not follow my running in the sky Go your way as the others And abandon from my light the envy for honey, My trajectory is the one of the clear nothingness Of the abuse of power of nebulas Of the imaginary and pure pleasure of the flesh, Then really consider fast something else, Do not cross my solitary curve, She would please you a moment may be But the madness would make you finally run away All which shines is not to be recommended, Midas is to regret that even today, The poet also sometimes has errors to payback. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Yann, this is very well done, cleverly put and honest, although you do yourself an injustice in the self-effacing parts. Everybody has errors to pay back, but very few people realise that they themselves do too. I enjoyed it very much. Owl |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
yannn, this is such a profound and beautifully written poem...i love it  There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I do so love to follow you, dear Poet Yann! This is quite exquisite. In the nothingness there is every potential for creation. You have created a wonderful poem. Love, Margherita |
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