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Open Poetry #47

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faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

0 posted 2011-02-28 07:23 PM

coarsen graves...
the blistering afternoon sun
baking the boquets
ontop of them
left as lifeless as
those they were placed
to pay homage to

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2011-02-28 07:55 PM

Touché . . .

~ Never did I feel more devoted to my wife than after biting the wild garlic of treachery ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2011-03-01 09:54 AM

Love this snapshot! Good job!
Lori

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

3 posted 2011-03-01 11:12 AM

Flowers bloom and die - humans are born but sadly sometimes never "bloom". I don't think we ever really die but certainly the flesh does. OK - now to get my mind off graves but all part of life and one needs to think on everything.

Helen

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

4 posted 2011-03-05 02:36 PM

thank you all for your lovely comments

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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