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Open Poetry #47

it isn't love

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

0 posted 2011-02-28 07:20 PM

it isn't love that hurts
it is the fear of
losing love
the disappearing passion
the separation
or final break-up
that causes anguish
no, it isn't love
that hurts at all

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2011-02-28 07:56 PM

Ah, it's all in the mix, Faith, everything is in the mix.

~ Never did I feel more devoted to my wife than after biting the wild garlic of treachery ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2011-03-01 09:51 AM

Come to think of it, you are right.

Lori

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

3 posted 2011-03-01 11:05 AM

Yes, Faith, you are absolutely right.

Helen

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

4 posted 2011-03-02 12:14 PM

totally agree faithmairee, the fear is the worse. thanks for the nice words.

yann

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

5 posted 2011-03-03 12:01 PM

Thank you all for your wonderful replies. I'm finally getting a few days off work so I will be around more. Enjoyed what you all have written.

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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