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Open Poetry #45
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OldPoet
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The Left Coast
0 posted 2009-07-19 12:41 PM


"And every time I've held a rose
It seems I only felt the thorns,
And so it goes" - Billy Joel
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Member Rara Avis
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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!
1 posted 2009-07-21 11:03 PM

I really like the poem, but the picture cracked me up.  If that was your intent - that's great.  If not, maybe this picture is too strong for the poem.  Don't know - but I did enjoy both.

Alison
jbstillwater
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since 2009-07-03
Posts 216
Albuquerque, New Mexico
2 posted 2009-07-25 03:13 PM

Me thinks the skirt just would not fit
though tug and tug you may
And thank the Lord 'cause if it did
You'd be writing under the name of
....ahem, Morgaine le Fey

(Just kidding, John-John, this is one of my fav's

Jan
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