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That Old Moon
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That Old Moon |
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Johan Member
since 2009-05-13
Posts 88Lincolnshire, England U.K. |
That Old Moon The moon has a face like the clock on my wall It faces the earth looking down on us all Looking over the ships tied up on the quay And squirrals and birds asleep in a tree It looks down on all creatures large or small The barking dog who lives next door The cat who chases the dirty old rat And last but not least, it looks after old me. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Johan, That moon sure gets around. He looks after me here in Philly too. He always has, since I'm some kind of night creature. Your poem works very well for me. Bobby |
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jbstillwater Member
since 2009-07-03
Posts 216Albuquerque, New Mexico |
Hah! AND, my friend, keeps me awake. I am one of those fools who believes that sleep can not come with a full moon, beautiful as it is! Great write Jan |
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Bloodline Member
since 2009-05-23
Posts 236Oklahoma |
Words can create a paper moon or reveal the moon for us to wonder, seems here the moon looks with peace and hopes we will pause to let the words light in and let it's music be a welcome song, much enjoyed the song and music, Bloodline |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I love moon poems! and this one reminds me of the ones, I used to read as a child, full of wonder and enchantment! ~ARH  |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
a beautiful moon poem ciseled with art and tenderness, thank you for the enjoyable read. yann |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Your words revolve around the reflections of your verse's power. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Love this moonlight that touches all and everything. Very beautiful! Love, Margherita  |
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