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love and the ways it is used... (etheree)
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love and the ways it is used... (etheree) |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere 
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trust soul~mates holding hands please marry me for better or worse i would never hurt you i will love you forever from now until the end of time i love you unconditionally i wouldn't leave you in a million years you will not compromise with me at all it's your way, all the way, or no way if i don't like it i can leave counseling...no, you wouldn't wow, did you just hit me i want a divorce living alone adjusting heart~break grief hope spirit lessons learned carrying on granting myself grace learning to love myself creating new goals and dreams protecting all of my treasures being someone better than before refusing to lay down and die...ever . don't wait for the storms to end~ |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Shellie, These are good etherees. Never stay around a man, or woman either, that hits you. Love Bobby |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~thanks, dear bobby... no...no one hits the brown~eyed girl! thanks for not commenting on my lower~cased 'i's love,  shellie don't wait for the storms to end~ learn how to dance in the rain... [This message has been edited by brneyedgrly (07-16-2009 12:18 AM).] |
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Clang Member
since 2005-12-15
Posts 222 |
All I can say is WOW! Great write! |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Dear Shellie I was so relieved to read where no one hit you. If anyone does you let me know and I'll come over and sort him out, in my dreams anyway. Nice write, love. Lindsay |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
oh hell, I'd spank ya.. nice work ms brown |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
I like how this is a roller coaster, much like life, and the presentation kind of matches it...etheree? i, have no problem with lowercase i's. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
The rise ~ the fall ~ and then rising again like the proverbial phoenix rising out of the ashes! btw Anyone who dared to lay a hand on our Brown-eyed Beauty, best be prepared to face an army of out-raged pipsters! Love to you, SS, Linda [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (07-16-2009 05:44 PM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I love the core position of strength this came from. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
brneyedgrly - you're a very good poet. I enjoy your writings... BC |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Now, there you go, Shellie. You will be a better, wiser person. Ida |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
clang~ hey, that's what i always say about your writing! thanks... sweet linds~ thank you for being my protector  love you...ds~ yes, that's a whole 'nother story  jer~ i like that you saw that...i saw it too lovely linda~ yes...you got it too lady, you are a star so bright in my sky that i see you even in the daytime...love you...kacy~ i somehow knew you'd see me that way...thanks gaia lady bc~ thanks mr romance ~kiss~ miss march~ yes...those things always make you better and wiser...thanks love, shel don't wait for the storms to end~ learn how to dance in the rain... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
hope spirit lessons learned carrying on granting myself grace learning to love myself creating new goals and dreams protecting all of my treasures being someone better than before refusing to lay down and die...ever Lesson learned gracefully, dear Shellie! Your reaction is that of a person who knows her true power, which isn't about muscles at all. Great poem in its wholeness, though I don't know the form, the presentation is beautiful. Love, Margherita |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
I understand this completely. And, sometimes, this kind of treament makes you wonder about this thing called "Love". Love, I thought, wasn't suppose to hurt. Those wedding vows no longer seem to mean anything to him. As for the last part of your etheree, YOU GO GIRL! I'm doing the same thing. |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~thanks dear 'rita...for always getting it right ~thanks sweet rose...i'm glad you see your strengths and you go girl too!  love, shellie don't wait for the storms to end~ |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Shellie~ if you ever need to talk about this, email me, I understand, I was in a verbal abuse relationship...and physical. You be independent, strong, you are special, and don't allow anyone to tell you different! ~ARH |
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