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PaulPerrona
New Member

since 2008-07-27

Posts 2
New York, USA

0 posted 2009-07-15 12:50 PM

I know why the sky is blue.
I know it has nothing to do
With how it is lit or what it is made of.
I know what lends it the flawless shade of
Intensely rich cerulean azure
Against which all other blue is measured.
It is She so dear gazing up at the sky
Where I see mirrored the blue of Her eyes.

I know why the sun is golden,
Not white sapphire as others are.
It is not because the sun's olden
Fires burn slower than other stars.
In truth, he draws a golden veil
To shade a face of fierce blue-white
So as across the sky he sails,
He bathes Her in a gentler light.

I know why the flowers bloom,
To lure no bee with sweet perfume.
Nor do they open their hearts to the sky
In hope of the hummingbird's darting eye.
They spread wide their petals in wonder and awe
Of the most unforgettable Flower of all
And waft their sweetness around Her there
So She may breathe a softer air.

I know what no others know,
Why the oceans ebb and flow.
They rise and fall but not in tune
To the beck and call of a wanton moon.
'Tis heaven's most entrancing Daughter
Whose breathless beauty enchants the waters
To rise from the abyss in a surging throng
And kiss the earth She has walked upon.

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

1 posted 2009-07-15 03:39 AM

~Bravo

WELCOME TO PIP!

enjoyed your poetry!

~ARH

Anniepimm
Senior Member

since 2008-12-26

Posts 550
England

2 posted 2009-07-15 03:57 AM

Hi and welcome to PIP's I enjoyed your poem quite deep and very enjoyable

bel1e
Senior Member

since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

3 posted 2009-07-16 09:17 PM

nicely crafted poem~

~enjoyed~

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2009-07-18 06:02 PM

I would say that you are most assuredly in L-O-V-E!!!! What a grand and poetic gesture of your adoration for "She".

~ "I know why the sky is blue."
~ "It is She so dear gazing up at the sky
Where I see mirrored the blue of Her eyes."

That is sooo ding dang romantic! However, I fear that everytime I look up at the sky from now on, I will be reminded of "She"! lol

EA

unboundpoetess
Member

since 2008-05-24

Posts 477

5 posted 2009-07-18 06:08 PM

Oh wow

sighcastles for sure...
many gorgeous ladyworship lines.

Warm welcome to you,
Heather

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

6 posted 2009-07-18 08:35 PM

"She" must be very special.
Ida

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2009-07-18 10:09 PM

A pleasure to read...James

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

8 posted 2009-07-18 11:50 PM

PaulPerrona - nice romantic write. I'm also from NY but don't live there anymore. Born and raised in Newburgh. Where abouts in NY you from...

BC

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