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brneyedgrly
Senior Member

since 2009-06-08

Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere

0 posted 2009-07-13 10:30 PM

i am annual growth
conical crown
budding branches in sky

i am falling leaves
deciduous decisions
carried by winds of change

i am perennial hope
radicle rooted
thriving in fertile soil

.
unshaken by your rustlings

.

don't wait for the storms to end~
learn how to dance in the rain...

rachaelfuchsberger

Senior Member

since 2007-02-21

Posts 609
Las Vegas, NV

1 posted 2009-07-13 10:37 PM

I am a huge fan of consonance. I enjoyed this piece.

Arana Darkwolf

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2009-07-13 10:52 PM

brneyedgrly - this writing is excellent, enjoyed reading it...

BC

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2009-07-14 07:02 AM

Dear Shellie, this is a keeper, quite simply!

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2009-07-14 07:17 AM

kewl stuff, brown

brneyedgrly
Senior Member

since 2009-06-08

Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere

5 posted 2009-07-14 11:55 AM

why thanks, rach...

will you believe me when i say that i didn't intentionally use consonance?

it just came through my pencil that way

thanks...

brneyedgrly
Senior Member

since 2009-06-08

Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere

6 posted 2009-07-14 11:56 AM

~thank so much, bc..

love ya...

brneyedgrly
Senior Member

since 2009-06-08

Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere

7 posted 2009-07-14 11:59 AM

thanks, 'rita...

this is my first keeper!

love,

shellie

brneyedgrly
Senior Member

since 2009-06-08

Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere

8 posted 2009-07-14 11:59 AM

thanks, dark stranger...

Yoinn
Senior Member

since 2007-08-16

Posts 649
Michigan

9 posted 2009-07-14 05:49 PM

I like the tude.

Keep up the good work.

Yoin

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

10 posted 2009-07-14 06:44 PM

Yo dear Shellie,

This is very nice work.

Love Bobby

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

11 posted 2009-07-14 09:57 PM

Lovely write. And its nice to put your face to your wonderful words now.

ARCTIC WIND

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