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Open Poetry #45

Lady of the Night

OldPoet
Member

since 2009-06-30

Posts 112
The Left Coast

0 posted 2009-07-12 11:34 PM

This was written for a fine lady poet who goes by the screen name of Raven. Raven fell on hard times which resulted in her living a rather unseemly life but she got herself turned around and is a model citizen today.

"And every time I've held a rose
It seems I only felt the thorns,
And so it goes" - Billy Joel

Heart2Heart
Senior Member

since 2009-05-15

Posts 738
Scotland/Norway

1 posted 2009-07-14 05:05 PM

Yes we all wish her well. And I personally admire her strong faith. A fine tribute to a sweet and good lady.
Katriona

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

2 posted 2009-07-14 05:44 PM

Yo OldPoet,

The lady has pretty legs. She reminds me of my woman. Does "unseemly" have something to do with nylon stockings?

Bobby

OldPoet
Member

since 2009-06-30

Posts 112
The Left Coast

3 posted 2009-07-14 05:55 PM

Love the "unseemly" quip. Good one!

"And every time I've held a rose
It seems I only felt the thorns,
And so it goes" - Billy Joel

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

4 posted 2009-07-14 09:54 PM

Nice touch with the candles, brings a nice romantic feel to the poem.

ARCTIC WIND

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