Open Poetry #45 |
Realms of enchantment |
Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
~ Realms of enchantment ~ When the quiet breath of midnight Sighs o’er the drowsy miles Bringing a sense of peacefulness From dreamlands mystic miles The gentle moonbeams twinkling May tease the tidal sweep A sight that’s truly wonderful A performance on the deep A lunar kiss to touch my mind That soothes the velvet scene Yet plays a part in daytime’s pace Haunting a pleasant dream I will think of the starlit ocean Where soft winds gently croon And dancing snow-white horses Serenade the smiling moon An enchanting world unfolding Till dreamtime hours depart To tantalize my sleeping And mesmerize my heart [This message has been edited by Heart2Heart (07-10-2009 03:20 AM).] |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
I will state the obvious here and say, your poetry enchants me. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I am also enchanted. Just beautiful as always. Ida |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Enchanting is right! Wow, another keeper. You are a wonderful writer! |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Thanks for sweet words Chalmette. Heart2Heart |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
beautiful write. enjoyed the read. yann |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Mesmerizing, yes! To read you is like being on a swing, it gives a feeling of blissful harmony with what is. Love, Margherita |
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Johan Member
since 2009-05-13
Posts 88Lincolnshire, England U.K. |
What can I say Katriona that hasn't already been said, just beautiful, your talent always shines through. Johan |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Anither very beautiful poem. You are a wonderful poet. |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Yann, thanks for your always so kind reply. Heart2heart |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
And sweet Margherita, your kind heart always shines through the words you penn, thanks ever so much. Heart2Heart |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Johan, old friend, your kind comment always warms my heart. Thank you ! Love 2 U Katriona |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Heart2Heart - I agree with the comments above, a most enchanting write... BC |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
whoops, hit the key twice... |
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jbstillwater Member
since 2009-07-03
Posts 216Albuquerque, New Mexico |
Wow! Could have used this poem last night, sleepless in Albuquerque! (lol) Full moon????? Loved this poem, Katriona, peaceful and happy. Luv Jan |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Thank you Bill and Jan, very kind of you to stop by and leave such nice words. Heart2Heart |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dear , I do believe that your poetry should be read world-wide before on retiring for the night. I doubt that there would be an insomniac left standing, so to speak! lol I thoroughly enjoy your poetry! Love & a hug, EA |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
What a lovely reply Earth Angel, thank you so much Heart2Heart |
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