The Noise of Life ( a balladeer challenge)

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Open Poetry #45

The Noise of Life ( a balladeer challenge)

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2009-07-09 09:04 AM

The Noise of Life (a trilonnet)

Each night before the dance of moon,
she rights her thoughts to only one,
awaiting voiced what need be heard.

Though dark that blinds may come too soon,
her dreams appear before its done
till sleep arrives, again transferred

Into a stage of hold, his tune
protects her from each day's begun,
when noise of life becomes the blurred

That endless flow, each year in June
when age continues on its run,
emotions wishing, wants deterred...

To fill the heart with silence of:
Embrace the new, and feel one's love.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Johan
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since 2009-05-13

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1 posted 2009-07-09 09:10 AM

I'm a lover of sonnets and your trilonnet, just a wonderful piece, thanks.

Johan

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

2 posted 2009-07-09 09:12 AM

You are quite welcome... it was something new to try as a challenge in the workshop forum.

Thank you,
M

Margherita
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Eternity

3 posted 2009-07-09 09:29 AM

Perfect in form and in content, dear Maureen!

Enjoyed this much.

(personally I lack the patience it takes ...)

Love,
Margherita

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now

4 posted 2009-07-09 09:52 AM

nakdthoughts - your words are as lovely as your heart...

BC

Oklahoma Rose
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since 2008-02-28

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5 posted 2009-07-09 11:36 AM

Once again, you have penned a beautiful poem, Maureen. Absolutely beautiful!

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light

6 posted 2009-07-09 11:38 AM

Congratulations on trying out a new poetic form! ~ And doing a very fine job of it!

Linda

Artic Wind
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7 posted 2009-07-09 12:06 PM

I have never heard of this type of poetry format before! Huh, you learn something new every day! I really enjoyed this Maureen

ARCTIC WIND

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

8 posted 2009-07-11 07:06 AM

Thanks again for the kind responses. The challenges are fun AW, check out the poetry workshop.

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