Open Poetry #45 |
I Do Everything Out of Order, Ellen. |
viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
In my haste to count my way to your sweet, mother-earth voice to surf amongst the delicate waves of your hair... I forgot to ask for your name. You told me so effortlessly, "It's Ellen." As if you thought it wasn't the most wonderful thing that I'd ever heard. ________________________________ -P Everyone deserves to be loved, even you. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
awww this is awesome |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Aw thanks SEA. Everyone deserves to be loved, even you. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Yep, you are on a roll with the poems. I am loving this one. It's like peeking into a guy's mind - well, doh, huh. Sheese, that was profound!!! Anyway, burp all over my comment if you wish - but I still like the poem. Ala'shroom |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Thanks Alahoon. -P Everyone deserves to be loved, even you. |
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Hatmadda Junior Member
since 2009-06-11
Posts 10Colorado |
Been there mate! Good depiction I might add. Enjoyed. |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Thanks hatman. Everyone deserves to be loved, even you. |
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Nancy Hardin Member
since 2009-12-02
Posts 58Nevada, United States of America |
Such a romantic you are! But it's great reading such a "baring of the soul," especially coming from a guy. (Is that sexist?) I read several of your works, and liked 'em all! |
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